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The Book Or The Writer by ~LoceImicaMornie:iconLoceImicaMornie:



The Book Or The Writer


What is freewill?

Is it to wear what you choose
Is it to say what you choose
Is it to be what you choose

Or are you pressured to do so?
Whats the influence?
Influence or choice?

Strong knowledge of self
Or is it,
Weak knowledge of self

Values or desire
Pride or selfishness
Caring or regret
Love or lust
Controlling or controlled

Does you consciousness talk?
Or is it you subconsciousness?
Which controls you,
Controlled or uncontrolled.

Spirit bound by everything
If so...
Would it really exist?


Would you exist?


Influence
Consciousness
Subconsciousness
Spirit
To which do you abide?
Do you already have a side?

Absent consideration,
Its your creation.

A puppet in this world,
Strings belong not to you.

Take control,
Or is it impossible?


Do you know?





Are you sure...
©2008-2009 ~LoceImicaMornie
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Author's Comments

This was a fun one to write. Inspiration came form a simple thought. Write about something that is unknown, and that is considered to be subject who's out come is very hard to distinguish. I really really like this poem a lot, its a mindful alright, and especially if you never thought about this before.

My views are that we all have our own choice. The only thing mentioned in there that i believe we do not have control over is subconsciousness. I think that it is a thing that tells us what we want... or more of a consideration. Other than that everything we do is a choice of whether we will be ruled, or if we will rule our own lives.

Do lots of thinking on this one, its lots of fun. Good brain teaser alright i will have to say. Let me know what you think of this poem, and what you think about freewill. Could be a very interesting discussion.


Peace!!!
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