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Life,
what is it?

Is it...
lies,
the pain,
destruction,
losing,
.....death?

Its been said,
life sucks.
For many.....
and it hurts.

The ones that lost a parent,
there heart was torn away....
What is she to do?

The one that changed to home schooling...
She has problems with friends.
Now she cant find any......

The one who’s friends are now doing drugs,
There losing close friends......
They change  to,
smoking and alcohol

The one that is alone most of the time.
He is only known mostly threw the net....
Other than that he’s really unknown....
What’s he to do?

The one that almost died.....
I don’t have to say any more with this one.


They are in so much pain,
it hurts to think on.
i guess the question is.....



Why?


Why all this.
Will it end......
Will I or they live,
to see an other day?


Its way to hard!!!
Life hurts......
It seems we are waiting to die.


Why?






Why, you ask your self,
the tear roles down your face.
Looking at the ground,
things pass.....
you never knew what you missed.




The thing is......
We ALL almost never made it.
We ALL had our times that that was it.
We ALL were so close to death........



But we live.


Threw the pain....
Lies....
Death.....
and Destruction.




Life sucks....
It never is nor will be fun.
You scream......





This is our lives.....
These are the things we go threw.....

Drugs,
Lose of friends,
Lose of a loved one,
Panics,
Death,
and worst of all......


Suicide.......





Why?



Because you never gave up,
you kept going.
Threw the all the pain life deals.
You hurt inside but you still walk.....


You look back and see only sorrow.......



The fact is......
Your ALIVE!!!!!


Threw  all the pain,
death,
destruction,
drugs,
pain,
and suicide.....

Your alive.....





You see your parent left you,
but you still love them....
There alive, and
Your alive!!!

You changed to home schooling,
you lose your friends.....
there still there, it takes time....
But.....
Your alive!!!


Your friends started on drugs.....
You look at them, they’re going to change.....
your free, you can find new ones.....
there always there, and that chance is because.
Your alive!!!


Your alone all the time.....
On the Computer.....
Cant find any one.....
well you can.
Your alive!!!


You almost ended it.....
YOUR ALIVE!!!



Life has given a second chance,
many never find this....
But the thing still is.
Your alive!!!


You can keep going!!!
you made it this far,
why quit?





Still don’t think so.....
Take this thought then.

How mature are you because of this?
How much more can you help people?
How much more do you know your self?
How much do you care?
How much do you see?
How much do you know your self?
Can you find what your looking for?
Can you find love?
Can you find your heart?
Can you believe?
Can you understand life?
Can you touch others?
Can you be trusted?
Are you strong?
Are you caring?
Are you passionate?
Are you YOU?



If you think you can’t.....
You’re sadly mistaken!!!

Because,
you can answer yes to them all.



To those that have learned from them selves....
I thank you..... but,
more importantly,
We ALL thank you.


You inspire us all,
We will fill you shoes one day.
And things will be better,
for every one that we will touch.......




This is our realm.....
some say its not worth it.
Other say we’re not worth it.
And some....... give up.


The fact to me is,
I wouldn’t have it any other way




I have found so many people,
and I care for them,
and they care for me.....













Reason to end it......




Not the question








Reason not to......










life
This is for those that have been threw this, life is hard. But in the end we all are still here, alive at that. We don’t have friends, we have family...... We don’t take anything for granted, we take every thing like its our last. Love is what we truly know, and friends are there for it........

My life isn’t easy, nor is any ones..... but we will continue to fight this till we emerge a new person, strong, radiant, caring, and never take any thing for less than it is.......

We are all unique........ don’t let any say your goth, or emo..... they will never understand who you are.....



Only you do.






Dedication goes to:


Those who dedicated them selves to help others,
Those who are in the mist of this pain,
Those who understand.......

And to the memory of those who never made it........ They will not be forgotten.



_____________________________



This took about an hour to write....... (+ half for the this lol)
it could have been even longer hahahaha but i think its long enough...... don't you? J\K Well i hope that the message in this one speaks load and clear...think it speaks many at a time.... and thats also what i was going for...... its many poams in one, so look for the separation and the individual meanings to get the large one lol. I like this one, defiantly one of my best..... inspiration came from so many people, manly my coz, who i love dearly...... thank you i can see and take in so much because of you..... i love you!!!!! And i am doing great ^_^ (yes i said it.... hahahhaha) I am doing well and i thank all of you that are helping me, and to thoughs that i am helping, i learn from you all......... heh, STAN YOU THE MAN!!!!!!!!!!! (hes the one that died and i never sead good by too....... *srug* had to say some thing in his memory hehehehehhehe)




Thanks............. you all keep me here,
i cant be thankful enough.
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:iconnaomiwulfeh:
NaomiWulfeh Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010
this made me cry so sweet and true =')
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saasn Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010
woooooooooow

i like your idea about life

ya like it

tanks
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DreamAtOpenEyes Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010  Student General Artist
woo amazing!!
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
Why thank you very much ^_^
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Maechen444 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:tears:
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
:hug:
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Maechen444 Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you. I hope love and beauty find you at times, too.
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner May 30, 2010
I dont know if you looked at the date of that piece but it is ageing. And believe me it has. Every one but one person made it through what that poem talks about.

Life
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Maechen444 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
XD

Even a simple thing like that can mean a lot.

Thanks
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Maechen444 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcs. Simplicity is love.
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:iconstormygrayeyes:
stormygrayeyes Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
thank you
it means a lot that someone can say this stuff. that there's still hope.
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2009
There is always hope my friend.

I have a friend that has been in and out of the hospital so many times now because of what she is dealing with. Her last stay was 21 days long...... And you know what, she is still going strong. Shes is also doing amazingly well, im proud that i could help her out as much as helping you out with by means of my poem.

Depression and sorrow are only temperamental, but you have your hole life to enjoy life.
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:iconstormygrayeyes:
stormygrayeyes Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009
thanks again
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009
hey no prob, and if you ever need anything you can let me know. I help people out so let me know if you need anything ok my friend?

Peace
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stormygrayeyes Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
thank you very much. you're a uniquely good person!
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2009
Like ive said, there is a lot of us out there ^_^

And thank you for you kind words, they do mean a lot :hug:
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xXbloody--angelXx Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
i just wonder..why we suffering or why i suffer why i have been hurted why i cant find my happiness is this the way i wanna live my life wtf hell no, i suffer and suffer then im going to die ,why life making fun of me ?? wats the point im nice i do every thing great i dont hurt people ,why every thing bad just happining to me ,i still cant find the answer ah lol why im saying it here sry im just :/
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
*sorry, kinda turned into.... well it just came out long lol. Read it though, its meaningful.*

well first, welcome to DA and if theres anything i can do to help you out around here, just let me know.

Second it all depends were you look. Like in questioning your own life... you should give your self credit. Not many people do that in its self.

I my self may have been in the same possition. My story is not told in that poem (and i think you for reading it, i know it takes a wile) but i have had problems as well. And when i was at the hospital for my depression i learned a lot. I spent a little over 25 days in the hospital from my experience...... And here i am. Having the time of my life, i graduated high school, i have a job that can get me into places. I have an amazing girl friend. My friends have grown closer, i know my self more, i know who i am, what i am, and what i want to do with my life. The values i hold to are stronger than ever, i take every thing for what it truly is. Everything.

Some people may be able to go threw life and do what ever they want. Be as rude and hurtful as they want.... and they will be fine. There will be no self doubt.... no pain... no consideration or self conflict. But here WE stand, the people that do have those problems.... and here we make a difference. Here we will stay and fight what others do not know of. Here we will win. Here we will thrive. Here we will live.

My life will never be easy... That i know, but threw all this i can see what really matters in life. And i know that threw my "family" as an example. My meaning of family has grown out of just blood lines. And is of the people i care for most. You will learn were to look for those special things that make life truly great.

Just keep going, if you want to make your life what you wish, you have to work for it. And trust me, it is worth it. Trust all the people from this poem, they will say so as well. I may not know you, but you are in my prayers.

Keep fighting, you will win.
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xXbloody--angelXx Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008
and sry for weird quistion but wat u mean give my self credit ...
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008
meanign that by questioning your self, you place your self in question towards the being of others. So you should be proud of that fact.
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xXbloody--angelXx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008
man can i add ur msn if u dont mind...?
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008
feel free my friend!!! I would greatly like to talk if you would like. Its on my front page so its all good. Cant wait to talk lol.
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xXbloody--angelXx Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008
2 words... (thank)(you) 2 free words (very)(much) :)
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008
hahaha your welcome friend.
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Cyndersbrother Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008
IDIOT!!!!!!!!! Life is a gift from God to his Creation. If u grow up thinking that stuff ur life is screwed!! u just think of the negative stuff about life. the reason we have negative moments is so we can cherish the good moments. GET IT RIGHT!!!!!
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2008
*nods* first negative comment one this one. Do not fret though, i welcome such debates my friend.

I would first like to say that it is written for those in the midsts of this trouble. When you are under this kind of pressure it is hard to get threw to what EVERY thing is about. This is my tribute to those people that are going threw those events (yes those are true things that have happened). A

And second, i am indeed deeply founded in Christianity. My parents are part time missionary's and have been to Rusha, Ukraine, and Panama all for gods word, and what his will is. This is why i welcome your insight and some form of debate towards this poem. Being so that you do not know me and my beliefs i will refrain from any judgment on the "IDIOT" aspect of your comment. This can be a debait if you would like (which is what i have commented from) or as a regulare discussion. Its fine for which ever aspect you chose my friend.

Till we talk again, Peace!!!

John M.
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flamedeluge Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
That was great. I agree and disagree...in my head it's true. For every yin in this world there must be a yang, but that doesn't really begin to explain what I really mean... NVM... I can't explain... besides in the end it doesn't matter. But really, I applaud you for being so postive and sending out such condusive energy. :clap: :sun: :heart:
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner May 8, 2008
there always is a yang, you just need to find it. If you don't put any effort towards the better things.... you'll never get them.

I need to write an other on though, its been a wile since i written something like this..... my keep that in mind for a wile though.

Thanks for stopping by..... and reading it hahaha,
Peace my friend!!!
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JoeCool42 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2008  Professional General Artist
wow you really hit the nail on the head there. Life does suck, but you just have to stick with it until things become clear.
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008
Amen to that. Its tough, but you know, things always get better.. not sometimes ALWAYS.
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JoeCool42 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008  Professional General Artist
indeed :thumbsup:
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jere3416 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2008
very nice, its good to know some1 out there cares.


and gets it.
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2008
*agrees fully* Its hard at times but in all, its worth it.

Thanks for reading,

John M.
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NegaZero Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Beautiful. And deep.
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2007
thank you.... no easy task to write i have to say. Thanks for stopping by too,
peace my friend
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NegaZero Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're quite welcome.
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RussianHippie Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2007
This made me think... it's very good, im gonna bookmark this for later :nod:
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2007
thank you. Its not how bad life is, its the things we over come.
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lil-twilight-wolf Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
it was so sad yet so happy and true heehee i want to answer the question asked heehee it looks fun:

"How mature are you because of this?i act like a 5 year old haha :D
How much more can you help people?not alot since im never there to help
How much more do you know your self?not alot
How much do you care?Alot about the world
How much do you see?hmm im part blind in one eye so i see half the life
How much do you know your self?Not alot ^^
Can you find what your looking for?NO never will
Can you find love?possibly not
Can you find your heart?omg 0.0 where is it
Can you believe?I beliieve everything
Can you understand life?Sometimes
Can you touch others?No!
Can you be trusted?Mabay
Are you strong?no way but i can Bite :D
Are you caring?Sometimes just depends
Are you passionate? nope :D
Are you YOU? hmm not really im a Shadow :D
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
hahahahah well done lol, still i hold true to what i sead though

"If you think you can’t.....
You’re sadly mistaken!!!

Because,
you can answer yes to them all"

but i know what you meen hahahha thanks for reading lol, meens a lot to me and all the peoplei dedicated this too as well thank you :thanks:
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lil-twilight-wolf Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
=^^= it was fun to read u have a good talent at this :hug:
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
thank you :highfive: i realy want to make an other that involves every one of my friends and there situations though..... but thats a lot to write. Might just wright a novel instead lol :hug:
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lil-twilight-wolf Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
heehe ^^ Novels are hard
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:iconloceimicamornie:
LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
that i know lol that i know *shakes head* hahahaha
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lil-twilight-wolf Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
lol ^^ i tried once but i died at 2 pages of non stop typing :D and loss of though and imagination
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
i know what you meen once again, it gets tough after a wile so i dont realy do that any more *shrug* but i can write pomes farly well :evillaugh:
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Rednightblitz Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2007
you made me cry..but in a good way.this poem discribes me perfectly, even thou it's your poem.
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LoceImicaMornie Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2007
Thank you, i tryed to get as much as i can into it........ it could have been even longer lol...... I am glad to hear that ^_^
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